My map!

[CoD|Gravity]

Heeey ! Im showing to you some Pics of my new map of Siege:D Hope you like the pics

Blue base





Blue base corridor


Blue base second corridor


Middle of Map


Red base


Red base corridor


Red base second corridor


Hope you like the pics ;D I still working on it.. making some secret rooms and that stuff

Have a good day.

'Gravity//.

[A^3]

Wow looks very nice gravity. Hope it turns out well. When you want to test it, I'll be here.

[CoD|Mostro]

wow!!! i would love to try this map!!! we should use it for training!!!

[CoD|avijusz]

oh man looking awesome! post a download link when its finished wanna see it!

[CoD|Gravity]

A^3:Thanks, I'll Test it soon
Mostro: Lol. We'll use it.
Ava: Thanks, I'll post the link the next week

I Still looking for the name of the map

[CoD|damic`]

Carlos when I'm can to play in this map?

This map looks interesting! Really Interesting!

[CoD|t3rminator]

CARLOSSSSSS <333333

[CoD|Gravity]

I Found an error in the map so the link above .. I Just deleted it. It was a problem with the Respawn.---

So... Here's the Link :
www19.zippyshare.com/v/68936758/file.html

I hope you enjoy it

'Gravity//.

[CoD|avijusz]

Hey,
downloaded + checked it. I have a few advices - here is my review:

Base: The open ceiling in red aswell as in blue base (near the flag spot where the rain comes through) looks a bit weird. You should add a grating(?) maybe (like this: encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSPlxmJLqsTfOFU2VengGzzEmRuZpcOIz_QWbkU1jvXA11LMP6r2Q) to make it looking more real. The water effect on the ground is looking very cool! Good Job there! Also, the window pyramids in the bases which are covered with rain are nicly chosen.

Middle: All in all looking good. The water effect once more does fit, like the little drops coming from the top. Good effect! Maybe some more plants would make it look cooler. And please, get those boxes a texture they look like they are made of plain stone and ruin the atmosphere!

Lightning: The lightning is generally ok. Only a few suggestions there: The middle could be a tiny bit darker for my taste. Only a little little bit. That would also make the windows on top (which are covered with water) more visual (aka you can see them better. My first thought was: Where is the rain gone? The top is open!?) Play around with it maybe.
I have noticed some light where I can't see where it comes from. For example in red base, where the open ceiling with the rain is located, the floors and walls are covered with red light but there are no spots or lamps

Last but not least I made some screen shots to show you some things:




All in all I have to say GOOD JOB - alot of very cool details and ideas!
Good atmosphere and use of lights! Keep it up m8!

[CoD|Mokonafan]

Carlitooooooooo Mi hijoooooooo!!
Nice work my son! xD

And name it Owls Nest! ;D

[CoD|Gravity]

FINALLY! Someone Give me some NICE Advices!

I'll try to remake the map with those advice soon... i been busy with the college and that stuff

Thank you very much Ava! ;D

And Thank you Too Mommy:D

[CoD|avijusz]

you're welcome! take your time! ^^

[CoD|Gravity]

Alright.

Base:I Changed the ceiling in red base aswell in blue base, near the flag spot.


Middle:I made some plants in middle, Those boxes have a texture now.


Now the map is a little more dark.


I made some decorations in this room, aswell in blue base.
(Barrels, Lamp and some plants):


I made some "mini ramps" in this place:


Im still working on the map. If you have more advices, please, tell me. For me, The map is looking awesome

[CoD|avijusz]

Cool, two more things:

[CoD|Gravity]

Ok. Thanks Ava. I'll fix it soon.